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i want to rip of your façade
i want to suck your memories dry
-leave only lies and hate
let me make you vulnerable
let me fuck your mind
kindly, soundly, let me take your fragile dignity
i want to open you wide
stick my tongue inside.
confide in me your fear.
is it me?
let it be me,
let my presence torture you.
agonize over my love.
let me enter,
penetrate your soul,
all holiness forgotton
Bleed. bleed for me
play me your song
i will satisfy your itch
give me your sanctuary
let me water your garden
let me pull you on a string
i will leave you
shattered of your demeanor
just lie down
it was all lovely,
dear
just go to sleep
©2002-2009 ~dionysusmarx
:icondionysusmarx:

Author's Comments

pretty self explanitory, i wrote this right after mechanical juxtaposition, and it is sort of about the same girl, like my attempt to shock humanity into her.

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:icontrash60:
wow, thats crazy. i like it alot better than the garbage i just read. i really like some parts of it, i like it all but some parts just stick out and make it really great. great job here.

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stay in school
:iconbenightist:
that was... shocking.
:iconformaldehyde:
good.. this is good... wow...

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The world is a fine place and worth fighting for.
:iconlaundrypowder:
hehe, erotic poetry is weird. but this does it well.
:iconnocode:
wow, i usually hate everything like this but this was....incredible. that was amazing. u just impressed me in a way i thought nobody could. wow. wowowow. w00t!

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:sushi: n o c o d e :sushi:
:iconmclaranium:
The poetry is not my Businez.. really, and I hate the things like this .. (user "nocode" deja-vu?) PC

Is really goodie, this is "Metaphoric" :) (Smile) Im love this expression Style... The work is EXCELLENT.. but no my style! hehe :) (Smile)

See ya

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. My Life Is a Movie, my Feeling the Soundtrack
:iconbeautyinme:
im a wimp for men with passion... you got lots of it!

that's why your work is amazing

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i am no ruff buzzi standing here
:iconvillain:
this is fucking awesome !!
:iconrezx:
It's ok.

I like the fact that you can expell your feelings as such..

But it is a bit similar to alot of others I have read.

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